Openers

1. As Linda flips open her tattered and ancient looking photo album, unshed tears wells up in her eyes, dimming her vision…

2. May is standing at her balcony. Gentle breeze caresses her face and blows hair off her shoulders…

3. Belle’s face turn dull red as she clenches her fist and punches the wall…

4. James wakes up and sweat runs in rivulets down his back..

5. Cindy cannot believe what she is seeing. At that moment, her mind ceases to work, stupefied by the unexpected vision..

6. As Mary enters the ballroom, heads turn and audible sighs can be heard as eyes glue to her appearance..

7. With spring in her steps, May skips down the sidewalk jovially, feeling excited to return home..

8. Eyes sparkle in the morning light as a smile that could light the gloomy night flashes across her cherubic cheeks..

9. Morning light is creeping in around the blind and Jane is awake..

10. Ben has been flicking through his diary again and again..

11. Jason slips his hand into his pocket, takes out a coin and flick it..

12. Joe is clutching the blue folder tightly on his lap as if it might run away as he is on his way to work..

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   theredpants Said:

   on 03/11/2009 at 01:32

   With the exception of #9, your openers are intriguing and interesting, with plenty of potential for stories. Good work!

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